I produced my outcome of demostration project of film in a form of storyboard, moodboard, draft, refind draft and primary research. I think my moodboard has shown my atmospheric theme well. That leads to my point on the project. I liked draft of my film because of an ending scene. However, after refining I realised of cutting certain scene to give even more impact. For example, I extracted last two scenes where CCTV sign shows up and door being closed continuously for a minute to give audience feelings. I instead received feedback and applied cutaways of zooming holes in the whole film. I definitly aware it is more impactive when the cutaways jumps scene by scene to make audience think refer to purpose of cutaways.
< the storyboard / Draft >
< moodboard
I could improve of maintaining even more safe environment where to take my primary research in case when I need a public bathroom pictures. I could find out when to visit it by knowing where people are not necessary of it. Also, I could improve on my refined draft by making it clearer. In order to achieve that, I could maintain lines and shapes repesented even clearer that allows eyes clearly drawn from main object to details. I am intrigued to develop my ideas further using other medias in photo workshop and IT workshop to do it above.
<Primary research of bathroom / refined draft>